初中英语作文的修改。
一、教学目标：
一）知识目标。
认识到写作中的常见错误并在平时写作给予改正。
二）情感目标：
通过一系列的教学措施使学生树立写作文的信心，从而热爱写作，勇于挑战写作。
二、教学措施：
总结分析，多角度讲解，从不同的方面展示错误，并深入剖析，让学生体悟。
三、教学步骤：
一）、常见错误。
名词的单复数问题：
1. …joy found there was much fish in the lake.
water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish.
place are very dry.
主谓一致问题。
1. and now many rivers becomes very dirty.
2. everything are going very well.
3. d**id with his little brother go to the park every sunday.
4. there are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.
时态和语态问题。
1. her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to last her mother s**ed joy. they were all got wet.
2. tom’s mother jumped into the water. she s**es her daughter at last.
3. on tree planting day,many trees planted in yongan park.
29th olympic games will hold in china.
chinglish 现象。
1. last sunday,ann with her mother and brother went to a park. the park with a lake.
2. i and my classmates by bus to dayang foreign language school.
行文的逻辑性问题。
1. at once, she jumped into the water to s**e her daughter with her mother’s help.
2. but she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river.
词类错用。i was sadly, i played with it. when i was happily, i played with it.
2. all of us are excited in it. because it can make we happy and healthy.
二）、典型病例总结。
名词的单复数问题。
主谓一致问题。
时态和语态问题。
chinglish 现象。
行文的逻辑性问题。
词类错用。三）、请你当老师。
书面表达。自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人……这使得……。骑车既可以……，又可以……。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？
please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
bicycle are still popular on the streets in beijing. it’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike.
but i think that running cars make air dirty. it was harmful to our health. riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be s**e.
because riding bikes will always make me happy, so i prefer to go to school by bike.
四）、书写歌。
句子开头要大写，每句之后有标点；
前句句末用逗号，后句开头用小写；
前句句末用句号，后句开头要大写；
记住书写须清楚，因为里面有分数；
先草稿，后定稿，书写歌谣记牢靠。
五）、homework
write a composition：
a letter to mrs zhang
今天，二中的张老师给你们上了一堂英语作文课，她和你们一起讨论，发现错误并修改错误，教给你们写好作文的技巧(writing technique)，她的课对你们写作能力的提高很有帮助。请你给她写一封感谢信。
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