高考备考阶段书面表达提升技巧。
上课教师：杨昌美上课地点：剑河县第二中学上课时间：2023年5月18日。
part1. teaching aims:
1. how to enable students to master the skills of writing a good composition..
2. teach the students how to use effective sentences to write a composition.
3. encourage students to cooperate with each other
part2. teaching important points:
how to enable students to master the skills of writing a good composition.
part3. teaching difficult points：
help the students learn the writing skills.
part4. teaching methods:
discussion, presentation, cooperative learning
part4. teaching aids:
the **********, the whiteboard and the recorder
part5. teaching procedures:
step1 lead-in
some samples of student work, and then ask students to give a score about these compositions respectively. after that, ask students where is the reason why they lost their scores.
and students h**e a correction to the composition together.
step2. common mistakes in writing.
1. 审题不认真，要点有遗漏。
2. 字数不够，未能传达所要求的信息。（show an example）
3. 书写潦草，卷面不整洁。（show an example）
4. 词汇量不够，基本句式不懂。
show the basic structures, then present some exercises)
steps to write a composition
the major points
4. sentences connection
5. express your opinion
6. error correcting
step 4 useful skills in writing.
1. 使用较高级的词汇。
2. 使用较丰富的句式。
3. 使用恰当的连接词。
show some examples to students by using the skills
step5 practice
联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员，请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：
1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。
2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。
3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。
注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。
2）词数：100-120之间。
ladies and gentlemen,welcome to our school.① 用关系代词合并为定语从句）this village is very small. it has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.
it used to be very poor.②（添加连接词） it has changed a lot since 1978③（并且一直发展很快；用现在完成进行时）. people here ④（过上更好的生活）are richer than before.
now it is taking on a new look.
the school here was very small⑤（并且大部分孩子不能上学；用afford to do sth.造句）. 添加连接词) now it has been rebuilt.
⑦用连接词合成并列句)the newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . 用关系代词合并为定语从句）it is the most beautiful building in the village.
all the school-age children can study here. they enjoy free education in it.
thank you.
ladies and gentlemen,welcome to our school ! this village is a small one which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. it used to be very poor.
② however, it has changed a lot since 1978 ③and has been developing very here ④ live a much better life than before . now it is taking on a new look.
in the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥but now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and he newly built teaching building⑧ which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.
all the school-age children can study here. they enjoy free education in it.
thank you.
step6. homework
ask students to write a composition
step7. teaching reflection
this lesson aims to improve students’ writing skills by using some useful skills.
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