英语写作好的段落

英语写作。

好的段落。1.完整。

完整是就段落中心的内容而言。为了使一个段落的内容完整，它所有的句子必须都围绕着一个中心主题进展表达。中心主题往往由一中心句点出，即主题句。

主题句或中心句可置于段首，也可置于段中或段末。请看下面的例子：

one of the central preoupations of the arts andhumanities is the observation of human beings. painters andsculptors create images of the human form; writers tellstories or pose poems about human experience; musicalartists give melodic contours to the human spirit;historians and philosophers ponder the essential qualitiesof human civilization and nature. and in our own lives, inour own ways, we spend a great deal of our energy andattention on our fellow creatures, being in families andother kinds of relationship, observing people withcuriosity and interest in the course of the day, thinkingabout and forming our own character-deciding what kind ofperson we wish to be-as we grow.

- don knefel

2.连贯。连贯是指段落的构造是否有条理。一个段落中的句子应该条理清晰，层次清楚，衔接自然流畅。只有做到这些，读者才能跟上作者的思路，明白他要讲的意思。

3.过渡。在一个段落里，即使所有的句子意思都清楚并且逻辑顺序排列正确，但是如果缺乏句与句之间恰当的过渡，整个段落的连贯性仍会受到影响。

以下几种方法可以用来加强句与句之间的连贯性：

1)使用平行构造；

2)重复一个词或一个词组；

3)在复指上一句提到的名词时使用代词；

4)段落中名词和代词的人称和数量保持一致；动词时态也须保持一致。

5)使用过渡词语：

1)用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

above; before me; here; on the left; across from; below;in the distance; on the right; adjacent to; beyond; nearby;opposite to

2)用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

first, second, etc. ;soon; eventually; in the meantime;then; thereupon; at the same time; next; thereafter

3)用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

first, second, etc. ;now; for the first time; but; asa result; furthermore; finally; at last; moreover

4)用于按比拟法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

another; furthermore; moreover; equally important; too,also; at the same time; besides; then; aordingly

5)用于按比照法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：

on the contrary; different from/ in contrast; on theother hand; to; despite; in spite of; unlike; nevertheless

这期的作业：

1.下面列出的是一个中心句和九个有关的句子。把句子按最正确顺序重新排列，并据此写出一段话。中心句应为该段的首句：

中心句：since i began living in an apartment and goingto school, my biggest problem has been the housework.

my food is a bigger problem.

worst problem is doing my laundry.

the apartment is not too bad; although ittakes time away from my studies; at least when i finish theapartment looks nice.

the food is burned, sometimes it is notcooked enough, and sometimes i h**e not measured correctly,so the food tastes terrible.

for my food is more difficult because idon't know the english names of many foods, and often ih**e to spend extra time asking for help.

laundromat is far from my apartment, and i wastemuch valuable time.

h**e never had to cook before, and usually theresults are discouraging.

i am embarrassed as i sit in the laundromatwith all the women, and so i wait until all my clothes aredirty before i do this horrible task.

also h**e trouble with the plicated instructions,so oasionally i end up with pink socks or a shirt that istoo small.

today's remend：

请看下面的段落，注意作者是如何使用以上四种方法写出了一个内容连贯、生动流畅的段落的。

americans are queer people: they can't play. americansrush to work as soon as they grow up.

they want their workas soon as they wake. it is a stimulant-the only one theyare not afraid of. they used to open their offices at teno'clock; then at nine; then at eight; then at seven.

nowthey never shut them. every business in america is turninginto an open-all-day-and-night business. they eat all night,dance all night, build buildings all night, make a noiseall night.

they can't play. they try to, but can't. theyturn football into a fight, baseball into a lawsuit, andyachting into machinery.

they can't play. the littlechildren can't play; they use mechanical toys instead-toycranes, hoisting toy loads, toy machinery spreading a toyindustrial depression of infantile dullness. the grownuppeople can't play; they use a mechanical gymnasium and aclockwork horse.

they can't laugh; they hire a edian andwatch him laugh.

-stephen leacock

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