初三英语话题作文
英语书面表达常用词语
好作文的标准
1. 卷面书写干净， 整洁，无涂抹，标点，大小写正确。
2. 审题清晰，立意明确，信息点齐全，完全符合题目要求。
3. 结构合理。首尾呼应，段落分明。
4. 句式多样，连词使用恰当。
5. 行文表达无语言点错误，立意高。
书面表达评分标准：
第一档：（15-13分）
完全符合题目要求，内容完整、丰富、健康。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇。
语言通顺，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（12-9分）
基本符合题目要求，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本。
通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：（8-5分）
部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（4-0分）
与题目有关的内容不多，只能简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。
一、开头用语。
one day, last week, first of all, recently, today, yesterday
i was so glad to hear from you.
how nice to get your letter again.
how are you recently?
二、归纳总结用语
in short, in a word, thus, therefore, so, finally
三、表示时间顺序用语。
before, after, later, soon, since, till, then, next, in a few days, in a minute, in the end, finally, at least, when, while, as soon as, during
四、表示空间顺序用语。
in front of, in the front of, at the back of, behind, beside, under, below, above, over, on, next to, near to, far from, on the right / left, on the other side of, in the middle of, around
五、表示因果关系用语。
because / because of, for, as, since, so, so that, so / such … that, therefore
六、表示转折关系用语。
but, however, though / although, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, even if / though, as（尽管）, still, all the same, after all
七、表示承接、递进用语。
moreover, next, then, so, secondly, thirdly, finally, at last, in the end, at the same time, by this time, soon, later / some days later, in a few days, after that, from now on, for example, for instance
八、写议**常用的承上启下的词语
first, second, finally, on the / one other hand, therefore, however, what’s more, as we all know, in a word, in other words, it’s clear that, i think, i believe, generally speaking, for example, in fact, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, it’s necessary / important for… to do
话题 1. 个人情况
自我介绍)一、 作文题目：根据中英文提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。 大明是个中学生，他想参加一个英语俱乐部，俱乐部要求他用英文写一篇自我介绍，内容要包括个人信息、家庭信息、学校信息、兴趣与爱好等。
以下词汇供选用：
提示词：there be, not only…but also, help, after school, hobby
二、有关此话题的好词好句 ：
1. i’m a middle school student who studies at no.11 middle school.. 我是名中学生。
2. my f**ourite subject is english. 我最喜欢的科目是英语 。
3. of all the sports, i like table tennis best. 在所有的运动中，我最喜欢乒乓球。
4. i often help my classmates with their english. 我经常帮助同学学英语 。
5. i enjoy helping others in my daily life. 在日常生活中，我乐于帮助他人。
6. i enjoy playing football and i often play it with my friends.
我喜欢踢球，而且我经常和朋友们一起踢。
7. i often help my parents with the housework, such as going shopping, doing some cleaning and so on. 我经常帮助父母做家务，如购物、打扫卫生等。
8. i often ask my parents and teachers for help. 我经常请求父母和老师的帮助。
9. i’m interested in music and often listen to it after class. 我对**感兴趣，而且课下经常听。
10. i usually tell them what i want. 我通常告诉他们我想要什么。
11. i always turn off the lights when i le**e the room. 我离开房间时总是关上灯。
12 .i often spend an hour doing my homework every day.我每天花费一个小时的时间做作业。
三、两篇范文 （a为基础优秀同学准备，b为基础一般同学准备） 范文一 (a档)：
my name is daming. there are three people in my family, my parents and i. my school is not very big but very beautiful.
the teachers are not only kind to us but also very knowledgeable. the students are very lively and clever. i can get on well with them.
i often help my classmates with their study after school.
i h**e some hobbies, such as reading english novels and listening to music. how relaxing and joyful they are! （79 words）
范文二（b档）：
i’m a middle school student and my name is daming. there are three people in my family. every day i often go to school by bus.
my school is beautiful and clean. our teachers are very nice but sometimes they are strict with us. i h**e lots of hobbies, such as playing football, reading english books and so on.
i like reading books after school. the books are not only interesting but also useful. （74 words）
三、实战演练。
作文题目：假如你是李明，升入高中后新同学之间需要互相了解，请你用英语做个自我介绍，内容包括：你的个人信息、兴趣爱好、学习状况等。
(不要出现真实姓名与校名) 提示词：f**ourite subject, enjoy, help, hobby
1. 审题。
定结构。分段。
定语法。定词语。
2．写作步骤。
1.)信息点1
可用的词或句。
2.)信息点2
可用的词或句。
3.)信息点3
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