短文改错 中考作文素材

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短文改错。

i hardly remember my grandmother. she used toholdingme on her knees and sing old songs. i was only four when shepassesaway.

she is just a distant memory for me now.

i remember my grandfather verymuch. he was tall, with broadshoulderand a beard that turned from blacktowardgray over the years. he had a deep voice, which sethimselfapart from others in our small town, he was strongandpowerful.

inafact, he even scared my classmates awayduringthey came over to play or do homework with me. however, he was the gentlest man i h**eneverknown.

holding改为hold 固定结构:used to do sth 过去常常做某事。

passes 改为passed 过去时态。

much 改为 well “我非常记得我的祖父”

shoulder 改为shoulders 单复数,双肩。

toward 改为to 固定搭配:turn to

himself 改为him 这里没有他自己的意思。

逗号后加and 并列句用and链接。

去掉a 固定搭配:in fact 实际上。

during 改为when 当什么时候的意思。

never 改为ever 他是我曾经见过最绅士的男人。

短文改错。nearly five yearsbefore, and with the helpbyour father, my sister and i planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. since then for all theseyearwehadbeen allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they result, the plants are growingsomewhere.

the fruits are small in size,but juicy andtaste. there are somuchthat we often share them with our neighbors. although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,butwe h**e never had any disease or insect attack problems.

we are growingwonderfullytomatoes at no cost!

before改为ago

by改为of固定搭配:with the help of在……的帮助下。

year改为years单复数:all these后面接复数。

had改为h**e时态:由since then得知应该用h**e

as result改为as a result固定搭配:as a result结果是……

somewhere改为everywhere由句意:植物长得到处都是。

taste改为tasty此处应该用形容词。

much改为many根据后面的them可知,这里用many表示可数名词的许多,而much修饰不可数名词。

but去掉或改为yet英语中although是连词,but是并列连词。所以不能同时用。

wonderfully改为wonderful tomatoes是名词,应该用形容词来修饰。

短文改错。when i was a child, i hoped to live in the city. ithinki would be happy there.

now i am living in a city ,but i miss my home incountryside. there the air is cleanorthe mountains are green. unfortunately,onthe development of industrialization, the environment hasbeenpolluted.

lots of studies h**e been shown that global warming has already become a veryseriouslyproblem. theairswe breathe in is getting dirtier and animals are dying out . we mustfoundways to protectyourenvironment.

if we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .

think 改为 thought 句意:我认为在在那儿很快乐。时态用法错误。这里用一般过去时,表示“过去认为”

countryside前加the 句意:但是我想念农村的家乡。这里countryside是特指,故用定冠词the。

or 改为 and 句意:那里山绿并且空气新鲜。连词用法错误。前后句为并列关系,故用连词and。

on 改为 with 句意:随着工业化的发展。短语搭配错误。短语with the development of随着……的发展。

been去掉句意:许多研究表明。主语与动词为主动关系,这里不需要用被动语态。

seriously 改为 serious句意:全球变暖已经成为严重的问题。词性用法错误。修饰名词,前面用形容词修饰。

airs 改为 air 句意:我们呼吸的空气变得越来越脏。名词用法错误。

名词air为不可数名词。 much 改为 many句意:许多罕见的动物已经消失。

名词animal为可数名词,故用many修饰。

much 改为many 修饰animals可数名词用many。

found 改为 find 句意:我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。动词用法错误。情态动词must后接动词原形。

your 改为 our 句意:我们必须找到方法来保护我们的地球。代词用法错误。这里应当是保护我们的环境。

短文改错。my uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothati live. though not very big,butthe restaurant is popular in our area.

it is always crowded with customers at meal times. some people evenhadto wait outside. my uncle tells me that the key to his success ishonest.

every day he makes sure that fresh vegetablesorhigh quality oil areusingfor cooking. my uncle says that he neverdreamsbecoming rich intheshort period of time. instead, he hopes thatourbusiness will growsteady.

that 改为where 考查宾语从句。从句缺地点状语。

but删去考查连词。though与but不可连用。

had 改为h**e 考查时态。通过上句可知描述的是现在。

honest 改为honesty 考查名词。成功的秘诀是“诚信”,不应是“诚信的”。

or 改为and 考查连词。新鲜蔬菜和高品质油都要使用,而非二者选择其一。

using 改为used 考查语态。新鲜食材是被用来烹饪的。

dreams 后加of 考查短语中的介词。dream of梦想。

the 改为a 考查冠词。在一段很短的时间内,而非特定的那段时间。

our 改为his 考查代词。叔叔希望“他”的生意稳中发展,而非“我们”的生意。

steady 改为steadily 考查副词。grow此处为不及物动词,表示发展,后面应加副词作状语。

短文改错。in the summer holiday following myeighteenbirthday, i took driving lessons. i still remember how hardfirstday was.

before getting into the car, i thought i had learned the instructor’s orders,soonce i started the car, my mindgoesblank, i forgot what he had said to me altogether. the instructor kept repeating theword,“speed up!” slow down!

” turningleft!” i was somuchnervous that i could hardly tell which direction was left. a few minuteslate, the instructor asked me to stop the car.

it was a relief and i came to asuddenlystop just in the middleonthe road.

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