my english teacher
miss tang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is tall and thin.
she has two big eyes and a small mouth. she likes cats very much. and she is kind and funny,sometimes she is strict.
we often play games in english classes. we all love her.
要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。同学们在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。
写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
my days of the week
i’m a student and i am in grade get up at six o’clock every day. i h**e breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. i h**e classes from monday to saturday.
i h**e an english class on friday and i h**e a pe class on tuesday. i don’t h**e to go to school on school, and i like to go swimming on that day.
要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅。
同学们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。
my f**ourite food
do you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow.
it’s long and thin. it looks like a small boat and crescent. oh, it is a banana.
do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is orange.
it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange.
i like then a lot. i like ice-creams. i like to chew gum.
chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much.
how about you? what’s your f**ourite food?
要领点评】my f**ourite food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外,文章**现了一些生词,可见小作者是用心查字典了。
i can help do housework
i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five.
i’m helpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes.
on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you? are you helpful, too?
要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很详细,到位。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
in the kitchen
this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look!
my mother is cooking in it. this is a microw**e and that is a stove. there is a big table here.
there are many things on it. what are these? they look yummy!
oh, they’re strawberries. and what are those? they are grapes.
要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。
my village
my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the village. near the village, there is a forest.
a small river is in front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see some fish in the river.
near the river, you can see a mountain. some flowers and grass are on the mountain. i like my village.
welcome to my village!
要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。同学们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
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