1 at that time ,标点直接在单词后面，不需空格再加逗号。
2 i showed a great interest in learning history. because of（这里解释原因，还属于上一句，不用另起一句，所以改为， because of…）her wonderful explanation
3 zhangweihong（中国人名字姓和名要大写第一个字母，改为：zhong weihong） is my f**ourite teacher,4. but she is in foshan （城市名大写第一个字母foshan）
5. she is tall and slim. she is very pretty.
she is usually in a ponytail, but sometimes she wears a hat. she has two big eyes, small nose and two big ears. （这几句话连续用she开头描写外貌，显得很单调，可以改为she is a tall, slim and very pretty woman with big eyes, a small nose and big ears.
although she is usually in a ponytail, sometimes she wears a hat.）
6. weihong（称呼老师要用mrs. zhang，一般不用名字称呼） likes smiling.
7. my f**ourite teacher（my f**ourite teacher标题所有实词的第一个字母要大写）
8. today i’d like to talk about me（我的my） f**ourite teacher--miss wei,she (wei, she在写完每一句话时，标点应该紧挨着一个单词，再空一格写下个字母，以下都要修改) is my physics（学科不用大写physics）teacher and the head of our class in grade one（grade one大写） in junior high school.
9. my f**ourite teacher is mr. zhong who teaches us chinese(定语从句用得好).
10. his name is liqiudong（拼音应写成li qiudong）
11. she has two brothers, they (用定语从句who) are tall.
12. heather has a good friend, her (定语从句whose) name is jenny.
13．my f**orite teacher is ma lizhu (中文名应该这样写ma lizhu) who is a maths teacher。(teacher.英文的句点是。
以下都要修改)
14. she is ****** and unadorned, (独立成句unadorned.) whenever, no matter, (no matter whether不管是否) you are children or adult, man or woman (men or women), she all can gives you the guidance patiently.
15. hello,my name is huang hong. i h**e many good teachers, but my f**ourite teacher is mr li.
（字体应该是times new roman,不是宋体。）
16. myf**ourite teacher英语字体不要斜体，除非是一本书名；
17. he taught us is that (去掉) geometry and algebra, (前半句应该独立成句algebra. his) his innovative and unique teaching methods, will (methods would不需要逗号) not make us feel boring.
18. among them, the most memorable is my chinese teacher mrs li, she is a more than 60 years old women, however, she knows
19. give me the greatest impression is the mr wang。
20. he is my first day of the class teacher;
he is very good for each student.
especially for my poor students.
i feel very happy to be a teacher attention.英语文章没有段落，不是一句一句独立成段。
21. not only helps me to study,but (逗号之后再空格写study，but) also teaches me how to be a person (beh**e) in the society.
22. her class always has (had) fun, but she doesn’t like (was not like不像) other teachers.
23. so we h**e (made) great progress in chinese.
24. chen sir (这是香港人称呼，不符合语法，改为mr. chen) is my chinese (大写chinese) teacher in high shool .
school.)
25. listening to his (we) h**e maintained good relations between students and teachers.
26. teacher li our english teacher.
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