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on excessive packaging

1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象2.出现这种现象的原因3.我对这一现象的看法和建议。

1）满分15分。

2）阅卷标准共分5等：14分、11分、8分、5分及2分。（3）评分档次：

14分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

11分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

8分---基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

5分---基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

2分---条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误、且多数为严重错误。

5 points

there is a question that many things h**e been

asweknow,.thethingsweboughth**emorepackage, times by, the package is more than it excessive actually.

becauseweneedtreestomakeboxeswhichusedtopackage. as long as i think, we buy things just want to get themwork, the envirnment problem will less and less, we will usefew money also.8 points

recently,therearemanygoodsareexcessivepackagingintheshops and markets. especially the people would like to packaged.

so why do we always see the excessive packaging? i think it isup to us. today, the development of our society are witnessed everywhere.

on the othere hand, the sellers wants to more money.

in my opinion, the excessive packaging is a normal thing. people

like beautifulandexpensivepackaging togive totheirfamiliesand friends. because it looks like very good, the people who points

thesedays,manykindsofgoodstendtobeexcessivelypackaged, to the beautiful decorations, rather than the commodityitself. there may be several reasons for this many cosumers are not sensible enough. they are easilycaptured by the nice appearance of the goods they intend to buy..

secondly,andmoreimportantly,peopletodaybuythingsnotonlyforthemselves,butalsofortheirleaders,workmates, or friends. in this case, the quality and practical usesof the goods may give way to nice-looking packaging.

asfarasi’mconcerned, its package away at once. so it is quite urgent to curb thiskindof bemore

people with useless decorations, but provide commoditiesof better quality.11 points

nowadays, a lot of goods are excessively packaged. for example,it’s reported that for mostmooncakes, the packaging cost is farmore expensive than the product itself.

the shopping preference of customers is to blame. businessmenare aware that quite a few customers would like to buy productsthat look attractive, so they make their best satisfying the some peole use the excessively packaged products asfifts, so in their minds, the more expensive the packaging is,

inmyopinion, nobody at all but do harm to the environment. excessivepackagingrequireslotsofnaturalresources,butwhenitisthrown away, it goes back to the environment as pollution. so .

besides,wecustomersshouldchangeourshoppingtastefor a green one. when there is no need, there is no producing.

2 points

now, the excessive packaging more thing. i think people lookingthis excessive packaging is because they love beautiful. so theythink must will excessive packaging.

but i think this is a people will that not not can this money. if they has small money, that always ismust money.

so, theyself look is a more money or small money question. but, people feel, that they will not can people love. they willnot can country love.

but i think, if they cann’t excessive packaging, that they will they can more people the end, i think people can’t h**e misstake.

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