作文。每篇作文都可以从以下十四方面入手。
效率efficiency 2. 方便convenience 3. 空间space 4.
安全safety 5. 经济economic 6.耐久durance 7.
健康health 8. 交流communication 9. 情感feeling 10.
性格characteristics 11. 成就achievement 12. 乐趣entertainment 13.
经验experience 14. 他人other people
a、替换词组
1. individuals,characters, folks替换people ,persons
2. positive, f**orable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3. dreadful, unf**orable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换。
army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. when it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
eg. many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.
5. a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6. harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely share--d that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7. affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8. shared 代 common
9. reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10. for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11. increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.
修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
has gained growing popularity.
sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12. little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13. beneficial, rewarding替换helpful
14. shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15. exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16. hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ..替换 unnecessary, **oidable
17. sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18. capture one’s attention替换attract one’s attention.
19. facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20. be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21. give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause
22. there are several reasons behind sth 替换。reasons for sth
23. desire 替换want
24. pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25. bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换h**e(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28. frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29. to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
b、连接词。
1、强调 still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. obviously, clearly.
2、比较 like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
3、对比 by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
4、列举 for example, for instance, such as, take …for example. except (for), to illustrate.
5、时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
6、顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
7、可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.
8、解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in ******r terms.
9、递进 what is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
10、让步
although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
11、转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately. whereas
12、原因
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
13、结果
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.
14、总结
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
15、其他
mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent（在很大程度上）, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,
c、结构。1、开头
1）recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern. 最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。
2）internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. it has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。
它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。
3）nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we h**e to face. 如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。
4）it is commonly believed that… /it is a common belief that… 人们一般认为…
5）many people insist that… 很多人坚持认为…
6）with the development of science and technology, more and more people believe th-at…
随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…
7）a lot of people seem to think that… 很多人似乎认为…
2、引出不同观点：
1）people’s views on… vary from person to person. some hold that… .however, others believe that….
人们对…的观点因人而异。有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．
2）people may h**e different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解。
3）attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。
4）there are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同。
5）different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。
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