英语高考作文之如何遣词造句

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1.用词准确,得体。

写作中每个词汇的选取都要符合语言环境的要求。其中,动词最为重要。

1)我把钥匙忘在车里了。

a:i forgot my keys in the car.(f)

b:i left my keys in the car.(t)

2)我的梦想实现了。

a:my dream has become true.(f)

b:my dream has come true.(t)

2.选词多样。

写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学习的较为高级一些的词汇。

1)我几乎睁不开眼睛。

a:i can not open my eyes.(一般)

b:i can hardly keep my eyes open.(优秀)

2)他是个新手。

a:he is a new one.(一般)

b:he is a green hand.(优秀)

3.短语优先。

多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。

1)我再也不能忍受他跟我说话的方式了。

a:i can no longer bear the way he speaks to me.(一般)

b:i can no longer put up with the way he speaks to me.(优秀)

2)他对我在课堂上所说的置若罔闻。

a:he didn't listen to what i said in the class.(一般)

b:he turned a deaf ear to what i said in the class.(优秀)

4.避免重复。

尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。

1)我喜欢读书而我的兄弟则喜欢看足球赛。

a:i like reading while my brother likes watching footballmatches.(一般)

b:i like reading while my brother enjoys watching footballmatches.(优秀)

2)杰克是我们学校的学生。他学习特别努力。

a:jack studies in our studies very hard.(一般)

b:jack studies in our works hard at his lessons.(优秀)

英语高考作文之如何遣词造句(二)

1.改变句子开头的方式。

可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前,放在句子的开头,这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏,增加书面表达的表现力。

1)我今天早晨收到了你十月十八日的来信。

a:i received your letter which was written on october 18th thismorning.(一般)

b:your letter of october 18th reached me this morning.(优秀)

2)那个房子既黑暗又空荡,跟我记得的形式不同。

a:the house was dark and it looked very different fromthe way i remembered it.(一般)

b:dark and empty,the house looked very different from the wayi remembered it.(优秀)

2.使用一些表达感情的句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。

1)那是一部有趣的电影。

a:it is an interesting film.(一般)

b:what an interesting film it is!(优秀)

c:how interesting a film it is!(优秀)

2)只是当他回来时我们才查明了真相。

a:we found out the truth when he returned.(一般)

b:we didn't find out the truth until he returned.(优秀)

c:only when he returned did we find out the truth.(优秀)

3.句式多样,复杂得体。

在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句式,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格结构、分词结构等也可使用。

1)他的父亲是否能痊愈还是个问题。他为此非常焦虑不安。

a:he doesn't know whether his father will recover,so he isvery upset.(一般)

b:whether his father will recover is still a he isvery upset.(简单句与复合句共用)(优秀)

2)你每天帮我学英语。你太好了!

a:you help me study english every are very kind.(一般)

b:it's very kind of you to help me learn english every day.(优秀)

c:how kind of you to help me learn english every day!(优秀)

练习。1.选择适当的单词填空。

t readthe sunlight.(in/under)

has abody temperature.(high/hot)

livesand often feelsalone/lonely)

think the patient will getsoon.(good/well)

with a tree and manypresents.(congratulate/celebrate)

2.一句多译。

1.妈妈匆匆忙忙上班去了,连早饭都没吃。

mother went to work hurrily;she didn't h**e breakfast.

mother went to workshe didn't h**e breakfast.

mother went to work in a hurrybreakfast.

2.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿去看电影。

i preferat home rather thanthe film.

i preferat home tothe film.

i would ratherat home than go to see the film.

3.我们到达农场时,受到了农民的热烈欢迎。

when we got to the farm,we were given a warm welcome by thefarmers.

whenthe farm,wea warm welcome from thefarmers.

onwewereby the farmers.

3.句型转换。

walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)

won't believe what he says.(使用状语从句)

had no sooner come back from beijing than he was sentabroad.(使用倒装句改写)

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