my english teacher
miss tang is my english teacher. she’s very pretty. she is tall and thin.
she has two big eyes and a small mouth. her hair is long. she likes cats very much.
and she likes singing and dancing, too. her english is very good. we often play games in english classes.
she is very kind to us. we all love her.
要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
my days of the week
i’m a student and i am in grade get up at six o’clock every day. i h**e breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. i h**e classes from monday to saturday.
i h**e an english class on friday and i h**e a pe class on tuesday. i don’t h**e to go to school on school, and i like to go swimming on that day.
要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
my f**ourite food
do you know what this is? guess! its colour is yellow.
it’s long and thin. it looks like a small boat and crescent. oh, it is a banana.
do you know what that is? guess again! its colour is orange.
it’s round. it looks like a small ball and a small lantern. oh, it is an orange.
i like then a lot. i like ice-creams. i like to chew gum.
chocolates and candies are yummy. i like them very much.
how about you? what’s your f**ourite food?
要领点评】my f**ourite food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章**现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
**：( pep小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评_无名小卒_新浪博客 i can help do housework
i am a girl. my name is li ling. i’m in class three, grade five.
i’m helpful at home. i can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. after meals, i can help my mother do the dishes.
on sunday, i can wash the clothes. what about you? are you helpful, too?
要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
in the kitchen
this is the kitchen of my family. it’s big and nice. look!
my mother is cooking in it. this is a microw**e and that is a stove. there is a big table here.
there are many things on it. what are these? they look yummy!
oh, they’re strawberries. and what are those? they are grapes.
要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
my village
my village is very beautiful. there are many houses in the village. near the village, there is a forest.
a small river is in front of the village. the water in it is very clean. we can see some fish in the river.
near the river, you can see a mountain. some flowers and grass are on the mountain. i like my village.
welcome to my village!
要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
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